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BooksBarack Obama Michael Cirelli Michelle Obama Poetry
Exclusive: Michael Cirelli’s Poem about the Obamas’ First Date
2:22 pm Thursday Jan 22, 2009 by Kristen O'Toole

In response to popular demand, we present “Michelle,” a poem imagining the night our new President took the First Lady out for the very first time.

 

Michelle

 

She answered the door

in a simple red dress,

her hair folded into a tight

spool – Barack wanted to grip

the polished rung

of her collarbone and climb

into her mouth, but this was

their first date, so they hot boxed

his blue Jetta until the smoke

was so thick it could be spread

onto shortcake, and he promised

her adjectives like interesting

and audacious, and he rolled

another jay, not wanting

to come ‘cross no square brother

at the firm,

and Michelle liked the way

his words were pennies flicked

into a fountain, and finally

they checked out a Spike Lee joint,

and after the movie he fit

his hand into hers all the way

home where he sealed his lips

to her ear and promised

               an obelisk for her garden. 

 

Michael Cirelli is the Executive Director of Urban Word NYC, an award-winning youth literary arts organization. He is also the author of Lobster with Ol’ Dirty Bastard (Hanging Loose 2008), which was a New York Times bestseller for poetry from an independent press, and Hip-Hop Poetry & the Classics (Milk Mug 2009), a standards-based curriculum that engages the intersection between hip-hop and classic poetry. His work has appeared widely in journals and anthologies, as well as featured in Poets & Writers, World Literature Today, King Magazine, and on Def Poetry Jam. His new book, Vacations on the Black Star Line, is forthcoming from Hanging Loose Press.

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22 Responses

rawksavvy • January 22nd, 2009 at 7:26 pm

effing rad. thank you!

sittingbytheriver • January 22nd, 2009 at 8:02 pm

very moving.

Frannie L. • January 22nd, 2009 at 10:16 pm

Swoon.

Caroline • January 22nd, 2009 at 10:25 pm

I once went on a first date with a guy who pulled something similar. But it was on the street in the West Village, and not in a blue Jetta, and as a result seemed more sketchy/less cute. Thanks for letting us post this Michael.

xhol • January 26th, 2009 at 3:46 pm

cheesy )

Karin • January 26th, 2009 at 3:54 pm

Hah

check yourselves.. • January 26th, 2009 at 7:13 pm

super offensive.. this post articulates white america's fears and fantasies about obama… thanks for a good reason to unsubscribe from this list.

Ba5tarD • January 26th, 2009 at 7:25 pm

And for shit like this they're receive awards in poetry now in America? It's simply horrible and extremely low brow. It's awful! American culture dying?

therock • January 26th, 2009 at 7:49 pm

Why do you think it's low brow or offensive? Because they're smoking pot? Or going to see a Spike Lee flick? Do you hate obelisks? Grow up.

sitting bytheriver • January 26th, 2009 at 7:53 pm

what else could America have except fears or fantasies?

Ba5tarD • January 26th, 2009 at 8:02 pm

No, I really like pot. ) Nevermind. When I was a schoolboy, I was writing "poetry" like this too. I thought it was a good try, but actually very bad. Now I think I can sell it in US. )

hesnotaboy • January 26th, 2009 at 8:29 pm

Michael Cirelli has been a National Poetry Slam individual finalist and the only person to make all three Bay area slam teams in the same year, winning the finals in both San Francisco and Berkeley. A two-time member of both Oakland and Long Beach, Cirelli has performed all over the country, while teaching writing workshops to teenagers up and down the West coast. While in L.A., he was the director of PEN Center West's, Poet In The Classroom program. He is currently an MFA candidate at the New School University and the Director of Urban Word NYC.

Ba5tarD • January 26th, 2009 at 8:40 pm

Very impressive. So what?

rosiel7673 • January 26th, 2009 at 10:22 pm

Naughty, but sweet.

anonymous • January 26th, 2009 at 7:54 pm

Maybe you'll find something you like here more.

showandprove • January 27th, 2009 at 2:07 am

please share your own work.

showandprove • January 27th, 2009 at 2:09 am

forgive those of us that live in the real world and/or aren't so anal we defacate brown spaghetti.

showandprove • January 27th, 2009 at 2:11 am

his words were pennies flicked

into a fountain

soooo cheesy i know!

Ba5tarD • January 27th, 2009 at 5:55 am

I can't – it lost in times.

kdollarsign • January 27th, 2009 at 3:48 pm

very good poem – like the imagining, love the jaw imagery, don't think it's cheesy, think it's very skilled

Poem of the Week » Blog Archive » Link Wednesday – John Updike, the Obamas, poetry slamming • February 18th, 2009 at 2:10 pm

[...] little slam poetry about Barack and Michelle Obama’s imagined first date. Make of it as you will. (link courtesy [...]

Nanker Pilgo • April 24th, 2009 at 5:26 am

Inane nonsense

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